Introduction
to poem and poet:
Nissim
Ezekiel is a very thought provoking and coercive poet whose poem *Enterprise*
is written in form of allegory ’extended metaphor’ that is suggestive of *THE
JOURNEY AS A METAPHOR FOR LIFE.* With his convivial inception of the poem, the
poet implores the mortals –the idea of team spirit, need of keeping alive the
high energy levels at any point during any project and the role of the
individual in a team project. With the high energy I remember a maxim that says
something similar to this –
Life
is not a 100 metre race it is a marathon that need to be swiftly and constantly
trekked.
IT
STARTED AS A PILGRIMAGE,
EXALTING
MINDS AND MAKING ALL
THE
BURDENS LIGHT.THE SECOND STAGE
EXPLORED
BUT DID NOT TEST THE CALL
THE
SUN BEAT DOWN TO MATCH OUR RAGE
So,
in this piece of the poem, the poet talks about how the journey in quest of
knowledge, wisdom, intellect and erudition started and everyone is obscured
about the stride they were following. They were moving /progressing ahead in
this journey of life in order to find solace and tranquillity. Unaware about
their trajectory still they had reason to travel – travel in all 4 seasons of
earth.
WE
STOOD IT VERY WELL, I THOUGHT,
OBSERVED
AND PUT DOWN COPIOUS NOTES
ON
THINGS THE PEASENTS BOUGHT AND SOLD,
THE
WAY OF SERPENTS AND GOATS
THREE
CITIES WERE A SAGE HAD TAUGHT
The
Poet explores the idea that process of self- exploration happens in the
perpetual journey of life. WE represents
the throng/herd/ flock of people
drifting/ travelling as a team, as they trespassed the threshold they penned /scripted various
manifestations and incidences that glazed them in the journey of life. SERPENTS Vis snakes
symbolizes the evil and sinister that will be one colour of life whereas
GOATS that emphasizes the peace and tranquillity will be another vibrant colour
of life so how both these colours need to be concocted in order to experience bliss of life is the
lesson being learned at this juncture. By now, they have travelled/voyaged 3
cities and have started cognizing the lessons one after other.
BUT
WHEN THE DIFFERENCES AROSE
ON
HOW TO CROSS A DESERT PATCH,
WE
LOST A FRIEND WHOSE STYLISH PROSE
WAS
QUIET THE BEST OF OUR BATCH.
A
SHADOW FALL ON US AND GROWS.
So,
here comes whirling point –point at which they*group* started getting detached
and how the differences started unveiling. As in the trespassing of desert
their occurred some feud that made a friend separated from the GROUP – this
friend was the one who was the most prodigious and astute of all of us and
represented the strength of the group. Losing out this one marked the symbol of
bad omen following us and that would halt our journey into next colourful event
of life.
ANOTHER
PHASE WAS REACHED WHEN WE
WERE
TWICE ATTACKED, AND LOST OUR WAY.
A
SECTION CLAIMED ITS LIBERTY
TO
LEAVE THE GROUP, I TRIED TO PRAY.
OUR
LEADER SAID HE SMEALT THE SEA
So,
now the line marks that life is a never ending journey as you cross one hurdle
there is something next awaiting/looming for you. In this continual process the
poet dolefully marks about battle of labyrinth and another section of people
who were prophesying to leave the GROUP before another unarticulated hurdle in
form of turbulence envelops them, at this juncture/seam leader / protagonist
gives them a sign of relief by demystifying the group about the aura of sea he
could smell and the beautiful and vivid colour that was awaiting to welcome us.
WE
NOTICED NOTHING AS WE WENT
A
STRAGGLING CLOUD OF LITTLE HOPE,
IGNORING
WHAT THE THUNDER MEANT,
DEPRIVED
OF COMMON NEEDS LIKE SOAP
SOME
WERE BROKEN, SOME MERELY BENT
As
they are roving they couldn’t see a single ray of hope – a light that would add
colour of joy and tranquillity within these mortals who are in lurch of
calmness and serenity. The only symbol was the straying cloud but that too
intermittent by the sun. At this phase they are divested/deprived of elementary
/indispensible necessities of life (soap‘s unavailability speaks of the pain
and agony they are experiencing). They were lost in the forlorn with their
heart broken and no hope left to embolden them to keep pace with the life.
WHEN
FINALLY, WE REACHED THE PLACE,
WE
HARDLY KNEW WHY WE WERE THERE.
THE
TRIP HAD DARKENED EVERY FACE.
OUR
DEEDS WERE NEITHER GREAT NOR RARE
HOME
IS WHERE WE HAVE TO GATHER GRACE.
By
the concluding paragraph, the lines leave an indelible imprint on the mind of
the readers and leave them thought provoking. Throughout the voyage of life do
many deeds, we make so many mistakes, face trails and travails, faces windfall
and misery but the only lesson we need to learn is never put a full stop to
this journey because: HOME IS WHERE WE HAVE TO GATHER GRACE-
Implies
these different phases are different colours, different experiences of life and
in order to knit a serene life we have to conquer / surmount every phase with
dynamism and vitality. Conquer yourself first and then explore the world.
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